Paper 1


- Avoid information and vague expressions
- Write in a sophisticated 3rd person manner
- Plan quickly
- Gramps isn't really needed- intro just needs to be brief




Questions 1&2


- Always provide some kind of evidence
- Comment on what is there, not what isn't
- Think about a range- demonstrate a breadth of language knowledge
- Affordance
- Revise word class




Grade descriptors
- Talk about graphology and affordances




A03
- Must use representation
- Must mention affordances with an online text
- Talk about peoples values and self representation - 'usernames'
- Look at the language surrounding the main body
- Look at how the site represents itself
- Constraint 'no face to face communication'
- Comment on the fact that it is asynchronous- delay in the response of the communication - can pick your response




personal targets


- More terminology
- Comment on affordances
- Offer alternative interpretations


Main idea is to use more terminology!!!!




Question 3


- 2 or 3 detailed paragraphs- not loads of rubbish ones
- Don't rely on audience and purpose
- Terms and evidence